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Friday Feature-Interview with Author Kathy Nickerson

20 September, 2013 by Debra

It’s the third Friday of the month, time for our debut author interview. This month I’m visiting with Kathy Nickerson, author of the Glory Circle Sisters series. I’ve had a delightful time. Kathy has a wonderful sense of humor, but also has conveyed meaty advice for writers. Enjoy.

Kathy will be available today only to respond to your comments.

Debra: How long did it take to write your book?

Author Kathy Nickerson interviewed by writer, editor Debra L. Butterfield.

Kathy: This book has been in my thoughts for about ten years. I would occasionally take notes or sketch a scene while I worked on other projects. I contemplated the characters and story often, usually on a long drive or when I was in the shower! I did the actual writing in about two years. Most of that was done in twenty-minute sessions before work each day. Then I’d marathon write on Saturdays.

Debra: At what point in writing your book did you begin to look for publishers?

Kathy: I didn’t look for publishers until I had a finished manuscript. I submitted portions of the manuscript as homework for the Christian Writer’s Guild Journeyman course, and I sent it in for a paid critique at the Guild. Then I queried a few agents, pitched to agents at conferences, and even submitted the book to the First Novel contest at the Christian Writer’s Guild. I had some positive feedback from those efforts, which encouraged me to keep going.

Debra: Kudos. That’s a well thought out plan of attack. How did you choose the publishers you queried?

Kathy: I queried agents primarily, because most of the publishing houses required submission through agents. I studied the agent’s websites, followed their blogs, and tried to read books they had represented. I also found some kind of personal connection to several of the agents I queried. A few I had met at conferences. One I’d been referred to by a magazine editor for whom I’d written several articles. And one represented my daughter!

Again, I got some good feedback on those, but no one picked up the project.

Debra: Many of the bigger publishing houses require submission through agents, and that can be discouraging. But there are a lot of smaller houses out there that accept directly from the author. Using a market guide helps find publishers we aren’t familiar with that very well may be a better fit for our project.

You mentioned meeting with acquisition editors via writer’s conferences? How did that go?

Kathy: I always found those meetings helpful, because even if the editor didn’t ask me to send in a proposal, they often had great advice about writing in general or my project specifically. I didn’t, however, meet with the acquisitions editor for the publisher who eventually bought my book! We chatted in the lunch line at a conference one day, but it was several months later before I finally contacted her about this manuscript.

Debra: (Big smile). We should never underestimate the casual contact we make at conferences or elsewhere. God uses all things for our good. When the publisher asked for a book proposal, what did they want the proposal to include? Was it difficult to write?

Kathy: Although the basics of a fiction book proposal are always the same, I found each publisher or agent did want some variations. In this case, I sent a cover letter, a one-paragraph description, a one-page synopsis, the first three chapters of the book, and a short writing biography. Later, the publisher also asked for a marketing plan. Some publishers had also asked for a list of comparable books on the market. I had studied all these elements in writing courses and had read some good books and articles on the subject, so it wasn’t too difficult. I actually found it helpful to write the proposal. I liked breaking the manuscript down into smaller elements and making sure the story came through each time. (Randy Ingermanson’s Snowflake Method for novel writing was helpful for this process.)

Debra: Give us a general run down on the process once your book was accepted.

Kathy: First, I danced in circles around my kitchen and screamed. A lot. Then, I panicked, because the publisher had asked for a marketing plan, which I hadn’t written yet. So, that was Step One. After that came the waiting and the inability to work on anything else while I obsessed about the upcoming revision process. I finally settled down enough to start working on the dreaded platform details. I hired someone to give my website a new look. I started a newsletter and blogged on a regular schedule. I made lists of contacts, media outlets, book review websites, and potential speaking engagements. And I established a Facebook Author Page and began posting consistently there.

Several months later, we actually started revisions. My publisher was extremely kind and helpful. I remember reading about an author whose editor asked him to cut the first 100 pages of his book. So I was relieved when our Skype chat started with, “Let’s look at page 91.” Revisions went smoothly, and then we moved on to art work for the cover. My publisher was generous and allowed me to have full input into that process. (I love the cover!) After that, it was mostly waiting and working on marketing.

Debra: I am really impressed with the fact that you sought professional education early on. I’m a Christian Writer’s Guild alumnus too, and no doubt what you learned in that course helped you create the targeted plans you’ve made each step of the way.

Writers who want to be regularly published and pulling in a livable income with their writing, really must take steps to improve their craft, and there are lots of affordable options out there besides going to college.

When you received your contract did you have it reviewed by a lawyer or was it straight forward and easy to understand?

Kathy: I don’t think any legal document is ever straight-forward or easy-enough-to-understand for the lay person. I know people like me should always have things reviewed by a lawyer. But, I didn’t. I was too excited to think logically, for one thing. Plus, I really trusted the person I was working with at the publishing house. I did ask her a couple of questions about the contract. But, in the end, I decided to sign it and “swear to my own hurt” as the Bible says, if it comes to that. I don’t think it will. I really do trust my publisher. But, in the future, I think I would refer to a lawyer. Being a writer is a business, and having legal counsel should probably be part of that process.

Debra: What specifics did the contract cover?

Kathy: The basics of royalties, rights, reprints, and who is responsible for what. I actually went online and read several sample contracts before mine came just to know what to expect. Mine was pretty standard for a first-time author.

Debra: Do you have any advice for other writers concerning contracts?

Kathy: Yes. As I mentioned above, I’d suggest every writer hire a lawyer to review contracts unless you have a savvy agent who does those things. (I also think you should have a good accountant because things get tricky in that department, too.) As a first-time novelist, I didn’t expect to have any negotiating room with a contract. But that could change in the future. Plus, some contracts now give the publisher rights to forms of communication that haven’t even been invented yet. I don’t think we want to give away our rights to holograms of our books, for instance. Better to sell those separately like movie rights.

Debra: Did you work with an editor from the publishing house during the publishing process? If so, how did that go?

Kathy: I’m working with a small publisher, so the editor wears many hats. When I worked with her, I was also working with the Head of Marketing, the Art Director, and the CEO. (And, possibly the janitorial staff.) It was a great experience. A small publisher brings such a personal touch to everything that it was like brainstorming with a writing friend. It helped that we have similar tastes. She asked for one change that I felt hesitant about. But I trusted her instinct and made the revision. She was absolutely right. Now I can’t imagine the book without that change.

Debra: (LOL) Yes, the personal touch is just one benefit of the small publishing house. How much of the marketing of your book are you expected to handle?

Kathy: A lot. But, I’m no different than Karen Kingsbury or Steven King in that. Okay, maybe a little different. Marketing is part of the business of writing. If we aren’t willing to do that, we should probably stick with writing columns for the local newspaper (which I do.) I’ve found I actually enjoy some of the marketing process, because it is just one more way to connect with people. And, I love people. My greatest fear, though, is that I’ll lose the balance. That I’ll forget marketing is still about touching and helping people, not about selling more books. It is such a fine line as a Christian to promote one’s work without becoming self-focused. I’m trying to figure it out.

Debra: What was the worst thing to deal with in the publishing process? What was the best?

Kathy: Marketing is probably the worst. Even though I enjoy parts of it, the tension I mentioned earlier is agony sometimes. I worry that I’m being too pushy, overbearing, or a nuisance to my friends. I have to check my motives in every conversation to see if I truly care about the other person or if I’m just looking for a chance to promote my book.

The best part, honestly, is when someone reads my book and loves the characters as much as I do. I know that sounds crazy. But, after all these years together, these folks are almost real to me. When someone I’ve never met writes that they loved the people, I feel like someone has complimented my child. Of course, then I have to check my motives again! It is so easy to get puffed up in this business. But it is also great fun to know you wrote something that connected to another person’s soul. That you made them laugh, or cry, or consider something important about their own lives.

Debra: What advice do you have for writers concerning finding and gaining a publisher?

Kathy: Learn the craft. I know that sounds like the boring part. But the last thing you want to do is burn a bridge with a publisher because you submitted too soon. Once you’ve given yourself to the process of learning, though, I’d suggest some investments of both time and money. Buy a Writer’s Market and The Christian Writer’s Market Guide, or get them at the library. Both are useful tools and great resources for the writing business. Then, check out the websites of any publisher or agent who interests you. Study their requirements and the kinds of books they publish. If they have a blog, follow it.

Also, invest in at least one writing conference each year. These provide tremendous information and encouragement, plus opportunities to meet real people in the writing world. Take advantage of paid critiques. Schedule appointments to talk to agents and editors. Learn to pitch your own projects and then actually listen for feedback. Sit with editors at meals and find out who they are as people. Make a connection. As I mentioned, I found my publisher through a conversation about the weather in lunch line. Really. The weather.

Debra: (another big smile) Amen to that. We are definitely on the same page with learning the craft.

What advice do you have for them for during the process between acceptance and release?

Kathy: If you don’t blog, tweet, post, or pin, learn how to do at least one or two of those. (Jeff Goins has great how-to resources for writers trying to learn social media.) This is the time to start connecting with readers if you haven’t already. If you have, become more purposeful. Learn to work social media into your regular writing routine. If this feels too trendy for you, consider history. Many of our forefathers started every morning “at their letters” where they corresponded with friends, family, and business associates. Communication is an ancient art, and Facebook is simply a tool.

Debra: Do you have a second book in the works? A publisher already lined up?

Kathy: Yes, the next book has started talking to me in the shower. I outlined it with the Snowflake Method during a class several years ago, and I’ve written several chapters. (Those have already been revised once from a paid critique with an editor at a conference.) Now the characters have started barging into my life and acting out scenes in my head. My contract for Thirty Days to Glory included an option for my second book. So, we shall see. If the first book sells well, the same publisher will probably pick up the second one. And the third, and the fourth, and so on. Or so I hope.

Leave your questions or comments below.

About Kathy Nickerson

Kathy Nickerson writes from rural Missouri, where she lives with her husband of forty years. They are the parents of four children who grew up to become their best friends and who have given them a dozen grandchildren, so far.

Kathy’s writing credits include magazines such as Discipleship Journal, Angels on Earth, Focus on the Family, Proto, and Kyria.com. Follow her on Facebook or connect here http://kathynick.com/

 

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Marketing with Purpose

19 September, 2013 by Debra

Today I host author Angela D. Meyer who shares about marketing.

Welcome, Angela. Thank you for joining us and for sharing what you’ve learned along the way.

Marketing with Purpose, by Angela D. Meyer

I started on this publishing journey with a lot of passion. It is just a matter of writing a good story, isn’t it?

Author Angela D. Meyer

That would be nice, but there’s a lot more to it. Marketing is high on the list of extra items.

I’ve learned a lot about marketing over the past year and a half. A lot of the “what” about the process. Now, I’m learning the importance of how marketing is done. How to do it with purpose. Not all over the board, wasting time and energy. Purpose that gains an audience and doesn’t burn me out in the process.

Here are a few things to help you apply your marketing plan with purpose.

Make it sustainable.

Something you can continue doing over the long haul. Once your book is out, you have to keep working to grow your audience. But you can’t keep up the pace of a two week blog tour indefinitely. Find an approach that fits with your life and pace yourself.

Make it fit you and your audience.

When it comes to social media sites, there is no end. It’s tempting to jump in to the next popular thing. But what worked for someone else, may not work for you. Spend your time, money and energy resources where your audience is, not where someone else’s audience hangs out – no matter how cool it is or how many go there. It might be nice for a one time book blast just to see what you pull in, but it will drag you down in the long run.

Give the same thing you would like to receive.

Every marketer out there wants his audience to engage with them. Leaving comments, sharing what they found. The golden rule has a nice application here. If you want people to leave comments, leave your own on the places you visit. People really do read through the comments, and if they like your answer, they will often follow the link…right to you. If you want people to invest in you, show yourself a wise investor in people, as well. It all will return to you at some point.

Make it about connections.

It’s not just about convincing someone to buy a book. It’s about providing something of value to help the one person in front of you. That’s where relationship happens and you make a difference in someone’s life. I think that’s what most writers want in the long run. And ironically, focusing on the one is what brings the many down the road.

It may take some trial and error, but when your practiced craft meets with purposeful marketing, you’ll have a plan that can be sustained over the long haul.

Where do you best like to meet your audience?

For more from Angela read my interview with her. Connect with Angela at www.facebook.com/AuthorAngelaDMeyer or www.angeladmeyer.com

 

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Writer Website a Must

17 September, 2013 by Debra

Tuesday tip from writer editor Debra L. ButterfieldGet past your fears, your doubts, your lack of expertise, your (you fill in the blank), about creating a writer/author website for yourself.

As a writer you want to give readers and potential publishers and magazine editors a place to go and find out more about yourself. In fact, it’s a must.

Your website is the answer. Here you can let them know who you are, what you have to offer, and list your publication credits. No credits yet, then wow visitors with your sparkling web copy.

What’s keeping you from starting a website? 

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9 Aspects of Dialog, from Author Cecil Murphey

6 September, 2013 by Debra

When I heard New York Times best-selling author Cecil Murphey (90 Minutes in Heaven) was doing a workshop for the writers group I belong to, I wasted no time in signing up.

How better to learn about writing than to be taught by a multiple, best-selling author? During the day, he taught on dialog. Here’s part of what he shared.

In all novels, dialog must accomplish 1 or more of the following tasks.

Dialog:

  1. Must have a purpose.
  2. Advances the story, furthers the action.
  3. Develops/shows the character.
  4. Shows emotional state of speaker.
  5. Conveys needed info succinctly.
  6. Brings immediacy to prose. Makes readers feel they are part of the scene. They “hear” the dialog with the character.
  7. Builds suspense and intensifies plot.
  8. Controls the pace of your story. It’s a speed control device.
  9. Can sum up: a character can explain in a few sentences to another person who wasn’t present during the action.

Thank you, Cec Murphey, for your permission to share these 9 aspects about dialog! 

In the coming days, I’ll be diving deeper into writing dialog. In the meantime, how do you feel about dialog? Love it, hate it, dread it? Leave your comments below.

 

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Get Rid of Superfluous Characters

3 September, 2013 by Debra

boxing knock out, get rid of superfluous characters

In his book The Art of War for Writers, James Scott Bell says,

[E]very character in every scene must have an objective, otherwise he shouldn’t be there. Replace him with a chair.

Review your WIP. If you find a character(s) who is superfluous? Do as Bell suggests, rewrite the scene and cut the character.

Now reread the scene. Is it stronger, weaker, mediocre? Revise until you are satisfied. It may mean putting the character back in, but do that only after you’ve determined his/her objective.

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The Benefits of Belonging to a Writer’s Organization

26 August, 2013 by Debra

writingThe benefits of membership in a writer’s organization are numerous. The benefits vary from organization to organization, but here are just a few:

  • Submission call-outs (markets accepting stories such as Chicken Soup for the Soul)
  • Networking with other writers
  • Print or e-newsletters of industry news and writing techniques
  • Discounts on organizational contests and conferences
  • Webinars, free or at discounted rates

I presently belong to two writer’s groups. The free webinars I get from Christian Writer’s Guild far outweigh the $99/yearly membership fee. The networking and camaraderie I receive from fellow writers in Heart of America Christian Writers Network keeps me encouraged and connected to the writing world, and I get regular notifications of markets wanting stories.

A Google search on “writers organizations” will yield a plethora of pages that offer a listing of organizations. While the listings aren’t exhaustive, they are worth the visit. You can dig deeper by searching on specific genres. Both the Writer’s Digest Market Guide and The Christian Writer’s Market Guide give information on writer’s organizations.

Here are a few direct links:

  • Christian Writers Guild, http://www.christianwritersguild.com/
  • Heart of America Christian Writers Network, http://hacwn.org
  • American Christian Fiction Writers, http://www.acfw.com/
  • Romance Writers of America, http://www.acfw.com/

Being connected to an organization within your field/genre will yield marketing opportunities and allow you to develop relationships that will both encourage you as a writer and push you forward in your writing career.

What value have you found from the writers’ group you belong to?

Debra L. Butterfield © 2013

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Database of Writer’s Guidelines

20 August, 2013 by Debra

Formatting your submissions according to a publication’s writer’s guidelines is essential. Finding those guidelines isn’t always easy, and even in this day of digital everything you often have to request guidelines via email.

For easy reference, FreelanceWriting.com provides a database of 836 writer’s guidelines, by category. http://www.freelancewriting.com/guidelines/pages/

 

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Point of View Defined, Part 2

13 August, 2013 by Debra

Point of view. Think about those words and it will help you.

From whose perspective are you viewing your scene? Whose feelings and thoughts are being expressed in the scene?

Example from my present WIP:
Chase stared at Karl with what he hoped was a questioning, please-continue look in his blue eyes, but Karl just sat there like a dog refusing to fetch. He took a deep breath, clearly concerned and struggling for words.

Explanation:
We are in Chase’s POV. He is describing what he does (stared at Karl), and because he can’t see his own face describes what he hopes he’s trying to convey (a questioning, please-continue look). Chase goes on to describe Karl’s behavior (doesn’t respond, takes a deep breath, Chase sees concern on Karl’s face and discerns that Karl is struggling to find his words).

Practice: Whose POV is this in?
The breath Chase had been holding escaped violently, involuntarily. Abby’s mouthful of coffee came sputtering out all over her lap and across the corner of Karl’s desk. Karl pulled a handkerchief from his suit coat breast pocket and handed it to Abby. She wiped her mouth and then swiped away the coffee from Karl’s desk. (Leave your answer in the comments section.)

Review several pages of your work in progress. Are you showing the observations and feelings of more than one character in one paragraph, one page, one scene? Rework accordingly.

Would you like some feedback or help? Copy a paragraph from your WIP into the comments section and we’ll discuss.

Related articles:
Point of View Defined

Debra L. Butterfield © 2013

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