• Skip to main content
  • Skip to primary sidebar

The Motivational Editor

Helping Writers Go from Unpublished to Published

  • Home
  • Services
    • Writing Coach
  • Book Store
  • Shopping Cart
  • Speaking
  • Resources
  • About
    • Contact
    • Guest Blog Guidelines

write

Dialog: Make It Work for Your Story

31 January, 2023 by Debra

smiley balloon thm
Our voices are as unique as our physical appearance.
Photo by GregRon Photography

(updated Jan. 31, 2023)

In a recent reader survey, several readers mentioned struggling with dialog, so today I’m pulling from the archive and updating it.

Dialog must accomplish 1 or more of 9 tasks, according to award-winning author Cecil Murphey. Perhaps that’s why it can be so difficult to write.

In real life we learn to recognize the voices of our friends and family.

But how do you recognize the voice of a story character when you never hear that voice?

Too often character dialog reads the same. But it’s important to give each a distinctive voice. But how?

[Read more…] about Dialog: Make It Work for Your Story

Share this:

  • Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest
  • Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • Click to print (Opens in new window) Print

Like this:

Like Loading...

Filed Under: Writing Skills Tagged With: characters, dialog, write, writers

3 Ways to Enhance Your Creativity and Motivation to Write

1 April, 2018 by Debra

dog dressed in shirt and headphones no motivation to writeI have to admit finding motivation to write every day can be a struggle. On many days, it is a matter of self-discipline to sit down and write.

So today I’d like to offer some suggestions that can help move us (I’m talking to myself here too) from the arena of self-discipline to being truly motivated every day.

First, let’s not forget what I said last month about what motivation is—the reason behind what you do.

Visualize your end goal and [Read more…] about 3 Ways to Enhance Your Creativity and Motivation to Write

Share this:

  • Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest
  • Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • Click to print (Opens in new window) Print

Like this:

Like Loading...

Filed Under: Motivation Tagged With: motivation, write, writing

Put an End to “I’ll Never Write Like That”

21 November, 2013 by Debra

hand holding pen
Write, write, write, and you’ll find your unique voice.

I’ve been reading a wonderful book written by Lynn Austin titled Hidden Places.

More than once as I’ve read the gentle, lilting prose of this story I’ve said to myself “I wish I could write like this.”

I bet you’ve found yourself saying the same thing as you’ve read books that gripped you with the power of those well written words.

But this morning the very moment after I thought those words, God answered back. [Read more…] about Put an End to “I’ll Never Write Like That”

Share this:

  • Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest
  • Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • Click to print (Opens in new window) Print

Like this:

Like Loading...

Filed Under: Fear and Doubt Busters, Writing Skills Tagged With: voice, write, writers

How to Analyze a Magazine

5 November, 2013 by Debra

analyze a magazineSave yourself time and heartache over rejection. Analyze a magazine first, then submit to those that will be interested in your idea.

Here’s what to look for.

Front Page: design and headlines will help you determine the target audience.

The ads: Who are their advertisers? Read enough of the ads to get a feel for the target audience.

General topics: are the articles about [Read more…] about How to Analyze a Magazine

Share this:

  • Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest
  • Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • Click to print (Opens in new window) Print

Like this:

Like Loading...

Filed Under: Writing Skills Tagged With: analyze, magazine, magazines, submissions, write, writers

11 Kinds of Articles You Can Write

29 October, 2013 by Debra

Listed below are 11 types of magazine articles you can consider writing. Each one has it own requirements and purposes.

The Devotional Article helps readers understand a biblical principle by applying a passage of Scripture to a life example. Devotionals are often short pieces of 300 words or less, but there are markets that accept longer readings.

The How-To Article is self-explanatory. This is a wide market as there are [Read more…] about 11 Kinds of Articles You Can Write

Share this:

  • Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest
  • Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • Click to print (Opens in new window) Print

Like this:

Like Loading...

Filed Under: Writing Skills Tagged With: article, articles, magazine, magazines, write

What Does the Publishing World Expect?

23 October, 2013 by Debra

I first met author J.A. Marx this summer when I interviewed her about her debut book, Destiny Defied. During that interview she spoke about publishing industry standards, so I asked her come back and share more.

J.A. has made a special offer for my readers with her post today. See the details at the bottom of this post.

What Does the Publishing World Expect?
by J.A. Marx

J.A. Marx, author of Destiny Defied
J.A. Marx, author of Destiny Defied

Fiction writing is a form of art. It’s fluid. Like music and fine arts, it changes to express and reflect the shifting thought processes and beliefs of our culture.

This can madden or bless the writer, and I’ll sum up why in one word: Subjectivity

I entered Destiny Defied in a contest a few years back. Two judges’ responses:

  • “I have not seen this good of writing in years.” Score: 10
  • “There are too many characters, and I don’t know where this is taking place.” Score: 4

Madden the writer: Agents and editors are equally biased for their own reasons, so research them before submitting anything.

Bless the writer: Write from your passion. Learn ALL the rules for writing before you start breaking those rules.

The essential standards (mentioned below) required [Read more…] about What Does the Publishing World Expect?

Share this:

  • Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest
  • Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • Click to print (Opens in new window) Print

Like this:

Like Loading...

Filed Under: Writing Skills Tagged With: dialogue, marketing, point of view, publishers, publishing, write, writing

5 Ways to Grow as a Writer While You Wait for an Editor’s Response

22 October, 2013 by Debra

Wait for the sunrise.Recently I had more than one person comment about their struggle with waiting. I’m talking about the wait between when you submit (or pitch) your work and when you hear back from the editor (or publisher).

We all have a different tolerance level for waiting, and the instant society we live in compounds the problem. But we can stay encouraged and productive while we wait.

What to Do While You Wait

  • Enter your article on your submission tracker, and start on the next project.
  • Develop/tweak your author website.
  • Read a book on writing craft and work to improve.
  • Learn the ins and outs of your favorite social media network(s) and use it to build your platform.
  • Most publications give a “will respond in” period of time. It can be several weeks to several months. List this on your submission tracker, schedule a reminder task in your calendar (I use Outlook) and follow up with an email to the editor when it is appropriate.

I think Kathy Carlton Willis offers the best advice with this quote from her upcoming book Your Life on Hold: Don’t Hate the Wait! “Sometimes between the ‘wait’ and the ‘yes’ we need to fall at Jesus’ feet and be caught up in total adoration of the Savior.”

We may not get a “yes” when the answer comes, but keeping our focus on the Savior provides us the peace and strength for every moment of the day, no matter what we face.

How about it readers? Add to the list the things that work for you. Leave your answer in the comments.

Debra L. Butterfield © 2013

Share this:

  • Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest
  • Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • Click to print (Opens in new window) Print

Like this:

Like Loading...

Filed Under: Writing Skills Tagged With: submission, submissions, submit, wait, waiting, write, writer, writers

Book Tour: Generations by Sharon Garlock Spiegel

16 October, 2013 by Debra

One of my favorite parts of being a blogger is interviewing authors. Today Sharon Garlock Spiegel joins us to discuss her new book Generations.

Debra: Welcome to the blog, Sharon. Thank you for joining us. First of all, tell us a little about how you became interested in writing.

Author Sharon Garlock Spiegel
Author
Sharon Garlock Spiegel

Sharon: The writing just seems to have happened without much forethought. First putting together little plays and dramas for fun—then for special holidays at church. Poetry has been part of my life for almost as far back as when I learned to read and write. I believe I inherited this from my grandmother. I attempted a novel when I was in the sixth grade. I don’t know what ever happened to all those handwritten pages.

Debra: What led you to write Generations?

Sharon: I wanted to give to my children and grandchildren the story of their heritage. I had no grand illusions it would ever be published. I printed paper copies and gave to family members. Somehow one of these copies got into the hands of a woman I don’t know. She contacted CrossRiver Media, a Christian publisher, and stated: “This book needs to be published, it changed my life.” Thus the journey began.

Debra: I know many writers want to make a difference in the lives of their readers, so that is high praise—the kind of word of mouth advertising that helps make a book a best seller. What is Generations about?

Sharon: It is a true story of redemption, my grandparents’ story. Generations chronicles my grandfather’s life of addiction and horrific abuse. It shows the miraculous changes that take place through his life-changing experience that brings about far-reaching results in the lives of thousands. It’s about Divine Intervention in the life of a reprobate.

Debra: What was your initial reaction when you heard from CrossRiver?

Sharon: I was humbled when contacted by CrossRiver. After thinking about it, I felt it was an answer to a psalm I had prayed: Psalm 71:18. “Even when I am old and gray , forsake me not, O God, until I have shown your strength and power to this generation.”

Debra: You said thousands have been impacted by the redemption of your grandfather. How so?

Sharon: My grandparents had 12 children and 27 grandchildren. Seven of their children attended Bible College, becoming missionaries, evangelists, pastors, and active in children’s ministry. Likewise a large percentage of their grandchildren entered full-time ministry. Today over 100 of their progeny are in full time ministry. I’m amazed how one life can have such a far-reaching effect.

Debra: How do you feel the book will show God’s power?

Sharon: When my grandfather was delivered from his hellish existence he was dying. His liver was destroyed, his kidneys were failing, he had to take strychnine to keep his heart beating. He was suffering from spinal meningitis resulting from an attack by two men that crushed his skull. Because of that he was taking morphine. The doctor told him he’d be dead in less than a year. When God delivered him, saved him, and healed him in one fell swoop, the result was a faith in which my grandfather believed God for anything. The miracles that followed border on the unbelievable but are documented and undeniable. I want this generation to be aware of the power of our God.

Debra: What was the hardest thing about writing this book?

Sharon: Recording the tortuous abuse suffered by my grandfather’s family because of his alcoholism and fierce temper. Keeping true to the facts was important, and I was fortunate to have eye-witness accounts from those who observed and suffered at his hand.

I wasn’t able to glean a lot of the horror from my grandparents even though they lived in our home when I was a teenager. My grandmother never spoke of those days, nor did my grandfather. He had laid it all at the foot of the cross. I hated dredging up his past sins, but felt it necessary to show the power of the cross.

Debra: Now that Generations is done, do you have other projects you’re working on?

Sharon: I have three books in the works. One is another biography showing the power of God. I’m also working to put together a book I’ve called “The Right of Redemption.” It’s a walk through the Bible, pulling out those Scriptures that deal with promises regarding our family. I hope to finish it soon. I also began a mystery novel a few years ago. I’ve re-written it a couple of times and want to re-do it again.

Debra: Anything you would like to add?

Sharon: My grandfather gave his own testimony that he lived for “self, flesh, and the devil” for 44 years. Then God in His great mercy gave him another 44 years to serve Him and preach the Gospel. I just found papers the other day with an account of his last days on earth. At age 88 he told my father “God may raise me up to live awhile longer.” Then he quoted the exact Scripture I have clung to, Psalm 71:18, “And even when I am old and greyheaded, O God, do not forsake me, until I have shown your strength to this generation and your power to all who are to come.” God’s timing is always right. He’s honoring his Word in this generation and I’m believing, with all glory going to Christ, that Generations will show His power to this generation and to those who are even yet to come.

Debra: Thank you again for joining us today, Sharon. I have no doubt God will reach many thousands through Generations. It is the most powerful story of redemption I’ve ever read.

Readers, you can find Generations at www.crossrivermedia.com. The book releases October 19. For those in the St. Joseph, MO area, Sharon is having a launch event at the East Hills Public Library this Saturday, Oct. 19, from 1-5. Come join her.Generations Cover 3D

ABOUT SHARON: Born in East Providence, Rhode Island, Sharon grew up on the East Coast. The daughter of a pastor, the family moved several times. Her formative years were spent in New York and New Jersey. Sharon holds a Bachelor of Science degree in Psychology a Masters Degree in Christian Counseling. She and her husband, Roger, now married 46 years, have three children, fourteen grandchildren, and one great-grandchild. She is an Assemblies of God pastor and school administrator of South Park Christian Academy in St. Joseph, Mo.

She marks the path of her life, with its twists and turns by the prayers and guidance of her godly parents and grandparents, with an emphasis on the leading of the Holy Spirit.

You can find Sharon at these locations: Sharonoragarlockspiegel.com; Facebook Sharon Ora Garlock Spiegel. You can email her at revsos@stjoelive.com

 

Share this:

  • Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest
  • Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • Click to print (Opens in new window) Print

Like this:

Like Loading...

Filed Under: Author Interviews Tagged With: author, Sharon Garlock Spiegel, write, writers

  • Page 1
  • Page 2
  • Go to Next Page »

Primary Sidebar

Make your journey to publishing a whole lot easier.

Self-editing & Publishing Tips for the Indie Author
Learn how to publish on KDP. Find correct formatting and grammar tips, and a whole lot more. Get your copy today!

Will Sally and Chase finally get together? Clemmy tries to help.

Embracing Her Inheritance book cover
Saddle up and join Sally Clark on her journey. Get your copy today.

Catch my new podcast on Spotify

Reading Between the Lines podcast
I've been featured in the Top 50+ Tools and Resources for Christian Writers 2024.

Categories

  • Home
  • Services
  • Book Store
  • Shopping Cart
  • Speaking
  • Resources
  • About

Copyright © 2025 · Infinity Pro on Genesis Framework · WordPress · Log in

%d